Multiple choice

Direction: The following sentence tests correctness and effectiveness of expression. Part of each sentence or the entire sentence is underlined; beneath each sentence are five ways of phrasing the underlined material. Choice A repeats the original phrasing; the other four choices are different. If you think the original phrasing produces a better sentence than any of the alternatives, select choice A; if not, select one of the other choices. The tortoise is endowed with a hard shell and is enabled by it to fight the harsh weather and stay safe from attackers.

  1. and is enabled by it

  2. shell by which it is enabled

  3. shell that enables it

  4. shell, thus enabled by it

Reveal answer Fill a bubble to check yourself
C Correct answer
Explanation

(C): Choices A, B, D and E are wordy and use a weak passive voice “is enabled”. Choice C is correct and uses the active form “enables”.