Direction: The following sentence test correctness and effectiveness of expression. Part of each sentence or the entire sentence is underlined; beneath each sentence are five ways of phrasing the underlined material. Choice A repeats the original phrasing; the other four choices are different. If you think the original phrasing produces a better sentence than any of the alternatives, select choice A; if not, select one of the other choices.

Steam was billowing from under the crumpled bonnet; Hedwig was shrieked in terror, golf - ball sized lump was throbbing on Harry's head, where he had hit the windscreen.