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Writing and Communication Skills

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This hub tests writing techniques, essay structuring, and effective communication skills. It includes practical exercises on vocabulary replacement, drafting passages, and formatting reports. These English language questions appear in most competitive exams.

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Writing and Communication Skills Questions

Multiple choice
  1. accuracy

  2. fallacy

  3. advocacy

Reveal answer Fill a bubble to check yourself
B Correct answer
Explanation

The meaning of Option 2 is illusion.

Multiple choice
  1. Objective type

  2. Essay type

  3. Matching type

  4. All of the above

Reveal answer Fill a bubble to check yourself
A Correct answer
Explanation

Objective type questions (multiple choice, true-false, matching, etc.) require careful construction to ensure only one clearly correct answer, plausible distractors, and absence of ambiguity. Essay questions are more open-ended by design and thus less complex to construct from a technical measurement standpoint. The question focuses on the technical challenge of question construction in educational assessment.

Multiple choice

Which of the following, if inserted before sentence 1, would make a good introduction to the essay?

Improving Paragraph

Direction for questions 1 to 6: The following passage is an early draft of an essay. Some parts of the passage need to be rewritten. Read the passage and select the best answers for the questions that follow. Some questions are about particular sentences or parts of sentences and ask you to improve sentence structure or word choice. Other questions ask you to consider organization and development. In choosing answers, follow the requirements of standard written English.

 Dinosaurs and Man

(1) These reptiles were very different from animals we are familiar with and they went extinct millions of years ago. (2) Some seem almost like monsters.(3) They existed as proved by the fossil record.(4) The young-earth fascination with dinosaurs centers on ‘proving’ they existed with man, hence indicating their world is not ancient. (5) The next article discuses how the theory that a global flood deposited the fossil layers does not hold water.  (6) People who are familiar with paleontology or history realize that before the dinosaur fossil discoveries of the 1800s, no one had ever heard of the long lost reptiles.
(7) The first evidence comes from mythology. (8)  Yes, you read that right.  (9) Creationists have had a history through mythology, looking for references to dragons and another beasts – and another beasts - and even the Loch Ness monster – and pointing to these things as possible indicators of dinosaurs.  (10)  Only recently did many creationists start agreeing with their critics that using mythology does not help one’s scientific theories very will and some have stopped using these ‘proofs”.  (11)  Most have also abandoned using the “Loch Ness Monster” and similar frauds and urban legends as evidences. (12) As a sign of the poor dissemination of information in creationist circles, some still print these things as true. (13)  So what do young-earth creationists purport to be the evidence of dinosaurs living alongside man? (14) Even the long ago abandoned claim that human footprints were found alongside dinosaur prints in the Paluxy River bed in Texas is resurrected quite often.  (15) Both secular and Christian researchers (including many young – earthers ) have concluded these prints are not human, but dinosaur prints like the ones they are found with. (16) Some reasons that the “human” prints are not human: 1. Too far apart to be human: 2.  Most are too large: 3.  Many show claw marks, etc,; and 4.  Some of the “prints” are simply erosion patterns.

  1. People are fascinated by dinosaurs.

  2. Dinosaurs and the flying reptiles were dominant during the Jurassic.

  3. In the light of the lack of tangible evidence, the focus is placed on the claim that the Bible refers to dinosaurs.

  4. How many asteroids did it take to wipe out the dinosaurs?

  5. Did you know that not all dinosaurs lived at the same time?

Reveal answer Fill a bubble to check yourself
A Correct answer
Explanation

Option (A), being a very general statement forms an appropriate beginning of the essay. Options (B), (D) and (E) are not further discussed in the passage.   The passage throws light on the availability of any evidence of the co-existence of dinosaurs with man,. Option (C), though discusses this issue, but would give a cogent meaning to the passage if placed within the passage.  This statement is not appropriate to mark the beginning of the essay.  Hence, (A) is the answer.

Multiple choice

The writer’s story would be most improved if a paragraph were included on which of the following topics?

Direction for questions 7 to 12: The following passage is an early draft of an essay. Some parts of the passage need to be rewritten. Read the passage and select the best answers for the questions that follow. Some questions are about particular sentences or parts of sentences and ask you to improve sentence structure or word choice. Other questions ask you to consider organization and development. In choosing answers, follow the requirements of standard written English.

 Spiritual Journey in Heart of Darkness

(1) Heart of Darkness by Joseph Conrad may be a narrative about colonization, revealing its drawbacks and corruption, it may also be understood as a journey into the depths of one’s psyche, if taken at a symbolic level.

(2) At the beginning of the novel, the reader is informed that Marlow is a ‘wanderer’ and was ‘not typical’ contrary to stay–at-home–minded seamen.(3) He has no home, in a psychological sense of the word.  (4) He simply “follows the sea”.  (5) This may evoke an interpretation that the man is disturbed, that he attempts to find out about the secrets of his soul, to get to know himself. (6) Since boyhood he had been interested in unexplored lands and especially in a long winding snake-like river with the “head” in the sea and “tail” plunging deeply into the land, which, as Marlow admits, “charmed” him.  (7)  This image resembles a map of a journey from the dark lands of the soul, the unconstrained, uncivilized core, which may be called a Freudian Id, towards light, that is Superego.(8)  Marlow desires to follow this path in the opposite direction to explore the depths of himself.

(9) If it is a dark Id, then Superego is presented as the civilized world, full of light, knowledge, awareness of the self. (10)  The light came upon the gloom of London with Roman conquest. (11) An orderly and disciplined society has been introduced by force formed by the ravages.  (12)The Roman conquest symbolizes the eternal battle between the Id and the Superego, the latter always struggling to impose rules on the former.  (13)  This is what is taking place in Congo.  (14)  The aim of the colonists is to bring Christianity to the black people, but in the end it turns out that it is not the civilization which wins, but the Id. (15) It rots the soul with corruption, stealing money from the natives. (16)  When there is no watch from the society over one’s doings, one can do anything they please, like Kurtz, whom Id overtook completel
  1. Marlow’s childhood experiences of sea.

  2. Marlow’s role in the Roman conquest.

  3. Some information on Kurtz.

  4. Marlow’s journey into his own psyche.

  5. The author’s perspective on the novel.

Reveal answer Fill a bubble to check yourself
D Correct answer
Explanation

Third paragraph satisfies the first half of sentence1 (Heart of Darkness by Joseph Conrad may be a narrative about colonization, revealing its drawbacks and corruption) whereas second half (it may also be understood as a journey into the depths of one’s psyche, if taken at a symbolic level) is not taken into account.  Therefore, option (D) is answer.

Multiple choice

In context, which of the following is the best way to revise and combine the underlined portions of sentences 10 and 11 (reproduced below)?

The light come upon the groom of London with the Roman conquest. An orderly and disciplined society has been introduced by force formed by the savages.

Direction for questions 7 to 12: The following passage is an early draft of an essay. Some parts of the passage need to be rewritten. Read the passage and select the best answers for the questions that follow. Some questions are about particular sentences or parts of sentences and ask you to improve sentence structure or word choice. Other questions ask you to consider organization and development. In choosing answers, follow the requirements of standard written English.

 Spiritual Journey in Heart of Darkness

(1) Heart of Darkness by Joseph Conrad may be a narrative about colonization, revealing its drawbacks and corruption, it may also be understood as a journey into the depths of one’s psyche, if taken at a symbolic level.

(2) At the beginning of the novel, the reader is informed that Marlow is a ‘wanderer’ and was ‘not typical’ contrary to stay–at-home–minded seamen.(3) He has no home, in a psychological sense of the word.  (4) He simply “follows the sea”.  (5) This may evoke an interpretation that the man is disturbed, that he attempts to find out about the secrets of his soul, to get to know himself. (6) Since boyhood he had been interested in unexplored lands and especially in a long winding snake-like river with the “head” in the sea and “tail” plunging deeply into the land, which, as Marlow admits, “charmed” him.  (7)  This image resembles a map of a journey from the dark lands of the soul, the unconstrained, uncivilized core, which may be called a Freudian Id, towards light, that is Superego.(8)  Marlow desires to follow this path in the opposite direction to explore the depths of himself.

(9) If it is a dark Id, then Superego is presented as the civilized world, full of light, knowledge, awareness of the self. (10)  The light came upon the gloom of London with Roman conquest. (11) An orderly and disciplined society has been introduced by force formed by the ravages.  (12)The Roman conquest symbolizes the eternal battle between the Id and the Superego, the latter always struggling to impose rules on the former.  (13)  This is what is taking place in Congo.  (14)  The aim of the colonists is to bring Christianity to the black people, but in the end it turns out that it is not the civilization which wins, but the Id. (15) It rots the soul with corruption, stealing money from the natives. (16)  When there is no watch from the society over one’s doings, one can do anything they please, like Kurtz, whom Id overtook completel
  1. Roman conquest; an orderly and disciplined society has been introduced by force formed by the savages.

  2. Roman conquest, which introduced discipline by force and formed the savages into an orderly society.

  3. Roman conquest introducing discipline that made the savages form an orderly society by force.

  4. Roman conquest introducing it into an orderly society; the savages maintaining discipline by force.

  5. Roman conquest forming an orderly society of savages that will introduce discipline by force.

Reveal answer Fill a bubble to check yourself
B Correct answer
Explanation

Option (B) is the answer as it retains the original meaning of the sentence while using correct tense, preposition and conjunction.

Multiple choice

Which of the following would be the best way to begin the passage?

Direction for questions 13 to 18: The following passage is an early draft of an essay. Some parts of the passage need to be rewritten. Read the passage and select the best answers for the questions that follow. Some questions are about particular sentences or parts of sentences and ask you to improve sentence structure or word choice. Other questions ask you to consider organization and development. In choosing answers, follow the requirements of standard written English.

 

Macbeth
(1) Composed in late 1606 or early 1607, Macbeth is the last of Shakespeare's four great tragedies, the others being Hamlet, King Lear and Othello. (2) It is a relatively short play without a major subplot, and it is considered by many scholars to be Shakespeare’s darkest work. (3) Lear is an utter tragedy in which the natural world is amorally indifferent toward mankind, but in Macbeth, Shakespeare adds a supernatural dimension that purposively conspires against Macbeth and his kingdom. (4) In the tragedy of Lear, the distraught king summons the goddess of Chaos, Hecht, in Macbeth, Hecate appears as an actual character.

(5) Shakespeare's Scottish tragedy is about Macbeth's bloody rise to power, including the murder of the Scottish king, Duncan, and the guilt-ridden pathology of evil deeds generating still more evil deeds. (6) Lady Macbeth was an integral part of the play’s most memorable character in the thematic web. (7) Like her husband, Lady Macbeth's ambition for power leads her into an unnatural, phantasmagoric realm of witchcraft, insomnia and madness. (8) While Macbeth responds to the prophecies of the play's famous trio of witches, Lady Macbeth goes even further by figuratively transforming herself into an unnatural, desexualized evil spirit. (9) The current trend of critical opinion is toward an upward reevaluation of Lady Macbeth, who is said to be rehumanized by her insanity and her suicide. (10) Much of this reappraisal of Lady Macbeth has taken place in discussions of her ironically strong marriage to Macbeth. (11) A union that on unfolding of the tragedy undergoes disintegration rested on loving bonds.

  1. Leave it as it is now

  2. Insert the sentence, “Young people who know of Shakespeare from Shakespeare Gardens and Beautiful Tales for Children may be surprised by what happens in Macbeth”, before sentence 1.

  3. Insert, ‘Probably’, at the beginning of sentence 1.

  4. Change ‘tragedies’ to ‘tragic novels’.

  5. Replace the comma after ‘tragedies’ to semi-colon.

Reveal answer Fill a bubble to check yourself
C Correct answer
Explanation

Option (C) is the answer as two time frames – ‘late 1606 or early 1607’ are given, which indicates the writer’s probability and not his certainty.

Multiple choice

Which of the following would make the best introduction to the essay?

Direction for questions 19 to 24: The following passage is an early draft of an essay. Some parts of the passage need to be rewritten. Read the passage and select the best answers for the questions that follow. Some questions are about particular sentences or parts of sentences and ask you to improve sentence structure or word choice. Other questions ask you to consider organization and development. In choosing answers, follow the requirements of standard written English.

My Laptop
(1)In the Stone Age, our ancestors used tablets to organize important thoughts, keep track of daily activities, and pass on their knowledge to future generations. (2) Their method of writing was inefficient as much effort was being put into carving and preserving the tablet, while the end result contained little information relative to its size. (3) As technologies evolve, we have refined our methods of writing and have come up with newer, cheaper, and more efficient ways to communicate. (4) Living in the age of information escalation, my most intimate experience with writing technologies comes from the use of my royal blue VAIO.

(5) In this essay, I will first describe how I have been shaped by my laptop, then provide nuanced detail about my use of it, and finally explain why my relationship with it is interesting.

(6) First, my laptop has shaped my style of living for the better. (7) Throughout my undergraduate years, I have taken the opportunity to travel and try many new things. (8) Specifically, I have participated in a few three to six month internship / cooperative education program in order to learn more about my own career aptitude. (9) During temporary relocations to Philadelphia, New York City, Boston, Los Angeles, and Taipei, my laptop has always accompanied me and provided great mobility to wherever destination. (10) In this, through the use of Outlook Express and AIM, my VAIO helped me communicate with colleagues during the day, and family and friends at night. (11) Beyond that, I believe the convenience of relocation that is implied in laptop ownership has vastly broadened my world views and has allowed me to become more independent as a young adult.

(12) Other than being a necessary traveling companion, my laptop has also become an integral part of my life while at school. (13) For instance, I use it to manage mutual fund investments, organize lecture notes and homework, read the news (I spend a lot of time at cnn.com), edit video clips, etc.

(14) I cannot live without my laptop, it's quite simple. (15) Throughout the years, I have become increasingly dependent on it for day-to-day activities such as corresponding with professors, keeping in touch with families, and friends, as well as organizing personal documents such as music, pictures, and the like. (16) I still make a habit of carrying it wherever I go, and probably spend more time with this so-called writing technology than any other object or person.(17) In the event of an emergency evacuation, it would definitely be the first thing I take and the last thing to let go.

  1. Since the beginning of time, writing technologies have been evolved by the people.

  2. The way people live has brought a major breakthrough in the development of writing technologies since the beginning of time.

  3. Of all the technologies, writing technologies has been most developed since the beginning of time.

  4. Writing technologies have been shaping the way people live since the beginning of time.

  5. Multitude of things is responsible for the evolvement of writing technologies, most of which are meaningful and essential, and some of which are purely for fun.

Reveal answer Fill a bubble to check yourself
D Correct answer
Explanation

This passage is an account on how the evolvement of writing technologies has shaped the author’s life, .  which the author exemplifies by his laptop (sentences 5 and 6 provide the clue). Hence, (D) is answer.

Multiple choice

The best way to describe the relationship of sentence 2 to sentence 1 is that sentence 2

Improving Paragraph

Direction for questions 1 to 6: The following passage is an early draft of an essay. Some parts of the passage need to be rewritten. Read the passage and select the best answers for the questions that follow. Some questions are about particular sentences or parts of sentences and ask you to improve sentence structure or word choice. Other questions ask you to consider organization and development. In choosing answers, follow the requirements of standard written English.

 Dinosaurs and Man

(1) These reptiles were very different from animals we are familiar with and they went extinct millions of years ago. (2) Some seem almost like monsters.(3) They existed as proved by the fossil record.(4) The young-earth fascination with dinosaurs centers on ‘proving’ they existed with man, hence indicating their world is not ancient. (5) The next article discuses how the theory that a global flood deposited the fossil layers does not hold water.  (6) People who are familiar with paleontology or history realize that before the dinosaur fossil discoveries of the 1800s, no one had ever heard of the long lost reptiles.
(7) The first evidence comes from mythology. (8)  Yes, you read that right.  (9) Creationists have had a history through mythology, looking for references to dragons and another beasts – and another beasts - and even the Loch Ness monster – and pointing to these things as possible indicators of dinosaurs.  (10)  Only recently did many creationists start agreeing with their critics that using mythology does not help one’s scientific theories very will and some have stopped using these ‘proofs”.  (11)  Most have also abandoned using the “Loch Ness Monster” and similar frauds and urban legends as evidences. (12) As a sign of the poor dissemination of information in creationist circles, some still print these things as true. (13)  So what do young-earth creationists purport to be the evidence of dinosaurs living alongside man? (14) Even the long ago abandoned claim that human footprints were found alongside dinosaur prints in the Paluxy River bed in Texas is resurrected quite often.  (15) Both secular and Christian researchers (including many young – earthers ) have concluded these prints are not human, but dinosaur prints like the ones they are found with. (16) Some reasons that the “human” prints are not human: 1. Too far apart to be human: 2.  Most are too large: 3.  Many show claw marks, etc,; and 4.  Some of the “prints” are simply erosion patterns.

  1. repeats the idea presented in sentence 1

  2. provides explanation for sentence 1

  3. corrects an inaccuracy stated in sentence 1

  4. anticipates a reader's possible response to sentence 1

  5. introduces a confirmatory view of sentence 1

Reveal answer Fill a bubble to check yourself
D Correct answer
Explanation

Option (D) is the answer as this would be our probable reaction on reading that the evidence of co -existence of dinosaurs with man comes from mythology.

Multiple choice

In context, which of the following revisions is necessary in sentence 2 (reproduced below)?

Their method of writing was inefficient as much effort was being put into carving and preserving the tablet, while the end result contained little information relative to its size.

Direction for questions 19 to 24: The following passage is an early draft of an essay. Some parts of the passage need to be rewritten. Read the passage and select the best answers for the questions that follow. Some questions are about particular sentences or parts of sentences and ask you to improve sentence structure or word choice. Other questions ask you to consider organization and development. In choosing answers, follow the requirements of standard written English.

My Laptop
(1)In the Stone Age, our ancestors used tablets to organize important thoughts, keep track of daily activities, and pass on their knowledge to future generations. (2) Their method of writing was inefficient as much effort was being put into carving and preserving the tablet, while the end result contained little information relative to its size. (3) As technologies evolve, we have refined our methods of writing and have come up with newer, cheaper, and more efficient ways to communicate. (4) Living in the age of information escalation, my most intimate experience with writing technologies comes from the use of my royal blue VAIO.

(5) In this essay, I will first describe how I have been shaped by my laptop, then provide nuanced detail about my use of it, and finally explain why my relationship with it is interesting.

(6) First, my laptop has shaped my style of living for the better. (7) Throughout my undergraduate years, I have taken the opportunity to travel and try many new things. (8) Specifically, I have participated in a few three to six month internship / cooperative education program in order to learn more about my own career aptitude. (9) During temporary relocations to Philadelphia, New York City, Boston, Los Angeles, and Taipei, my laptop has always accompanied me and provided great mobility to wherever destination. (10) In this, through the use of Outlook Express and AIM, my VAIO helped me communicate with colleagues during the day, and family and friends at night. (11) Beyond that, I believe the convenience of relocation that is implied in laptop ownership has vastly broadened my world views and has allowed me to become more independent as a young adult.

(12) Other than being a necessary traveling companion, my laptop has also become an integral part of my life while at school. (13) For instance, I use it to manage mutual fund investments, organize lecture notes and homework, read the news (I spend a lot of time at cnn.com), edit video clips, etc.

(14) I cannot live without my laptop, it's quite simple. (15) Throughout the years, I have become increasingly dependent on it for day-to-day activities such as corresponding with professors, keeping in touch with families, and friends, as well as organizing personal documents such as music, pictures, and the like. (16) I still make a habit of carrying it wherever I go, and probably spend more time with this so-called writing technology than any other object or person.(17) In the event of an emergency evacuation, it would definitely be the first thing I take and the last thing to let go.

  1. (As it is now)

  2. Insert ‘Arguably’ at the beginning of the sentence.

  3. Change ‘was’ to ‘had been’

  4. Delete ‘being’

  5. Change ‘while’ to ‘yet’

Reveal answer Fill a bubble to check yourself
B Correct answer
Explanation

In sentence2, the author cites his own perspective regarding tablets.  Hence, option (B) would form the appropriate answer.

Multiple choice

Which of the following is the best way to revise the underlined portion of sentence 10 (reproduced below)?

In this, through the use of Outlook Express and AIM, my VAIO helped me communicate with colleagues during the day, and family and friends at night.

Direction for questions 19 to 24: The following passage is an early draft of an essay. Some parts of the passage need to be rewritten. Read the passage and select the best answers for the questions that follow. Some questions are about particular sentences or parts of sentences and ask you to improve sentence structure or word choice. Other questions ask you to consider organization and development. In choosing answers, follow the requirements of standard written English.

My Laptop
(1)In the Stone Age, our ancestors used tablets to organize important thoughts, keep track of daily activities, and pass on their knowledge to future generations. (2) Their method of writing was inefficient as much effort was being put into carving and preserving the tablet, while the end result contained little information relative to its size. (3) As technologies evolve, we have refined our methods of writing and have come up with newer, cheaper, and more efficient ways to communicate. (4) Living in the age of information escalation, my most intimate experience with writing technologies comes from the use of my royal blue VAIO.

(5) In this essay, I will first describe how I have been shaped by my laptop, then provide nuanced detail about my use of it, and finally explain why my relationship with it is interesting.

(6) First, my laptop has shaped my style of living for the better. (7) Throughout my undergraduate years, I have taken the opportunity to travel and try many new things. (8) Specifically, I have participated in a few three to six month internship / cooperative education program in order to learn more about my own career aptitude. (9) During temporary relocations to Philadelphia, New York City, Boston, Los Angeles, and Taipei, my laptop has always accompanied me and provided great mobility to wherever destination. (10) In this, through the use of Outlook Express and AIM, my VAIO helped me communicate with colleagues during the day, and family and friends at night. (11) Beyond that, I believe the convenience of relocation that is implied in laptop ownership has vastly broadened my world views and has allowed me to become more independent as a young adult.

(12) Other than being a necessary traveling companion, my laptop has also become an integral part of my life while at school. (13) For instance, I use it to manage mutual fund investments, organize lecture notes and homework, read the news (I spend a lot of time at cnn.com), edit video clips, etc.

(14) I cannot live without my laptop, it's quite simple. (15) Throughout the years, I have become increasingly dependent on it for day-to-day activities such as corresponding with professors, keeping in touch with families, and friends, as well as organizing personal documents such as music, pictures, and the like. (16) I still make a habit of carrying it wherever I go, and probably spend more time with this so-called writing technology than any other object or person.(17) In the event of an emergency evacuation, it would definitely be the first thing I take and the last thing to let go.

  1. Leave it as it is.

  2. In this age,

  3. In America anywhere,

  4. In college,

  5. In the most practical sense.

Reveal answer Fill a bubble to check yourself
E Correct answer
Explanation

Option (E) is the answer as it cogently forms a link with the latter part of the sentence. Option (A) is ambiguous, options (B) and (D) out of context and America in (C) can’t be generalized.

Multiple choice

Which of the following is the best way to revise the underlined portion of sentence 11 (reproduced below)?

Beyond that, I believe the convenience of relocation that is implied in laptop ownership has vastly broadened my world views and has allowed me to become more independent as a young adult.

Direction for questions 19 to 24: The following passage is an early draft of an essay. Some parts of the passage need to be rewritten. Read the passage and select the best answers for the questions that follow. Some questions are about particular sentences or parts of sentences and ask you to improve sentence structure or word choice. Other questions ask you to consider organization and development. In choosing answers, follow the requirements of standard written English.

My Laptop
(1)In the Stone Age, our ancestors used tablets to organize important thoughts, keep track of daily activities, and pass on their knowledge to future generations. (2) Their method of writing was inefficient as much effort was being put into carving and preserving the tablet, while the end result contained little information relative to its size. (3) As technologies evolve, we have refined our methods of writing and have come up with newer, cheaper, and more efficient ways to communicate. (4) Living in the age of information escalation, my most intimate experience with writing technologies comes from the use of my royal blue VAIO.

(5) In this essay, I will first describe how I have been shaped by my laptop, then provide nuanced detail about my use of it, and finally explain why my relationship with it is interesting.

(6) First, my laptop has shaped my style of living for the better. (7) Throughout my undergraduate years, I have taken the opportunity to travel and try many new things. (8) Specifically, I have participated in a few three to six month internship / cooperative education program in order to learn more about my own career aptitude. (9) During temporary relocations to Philadelphia, New York City, Boston, Los Angeles, and Taipei, my laptop has always accompanied me and provided great mobility to wherever destination. (10) In this, through the use of Outlook Express and AIM, my VAIO helped me communicate with colleagues during the day, and family and friends at night. (11) Beyond that, I believe the convenience of relocation that is implied in laptop ownership has vastly broadened my world views and has allowed me to become more independent as a young adult.

(12) Other than being a necessary traveling companion, my laptop has also become an integral part of my life while at school. (13) For instance, I use it to manage mutual fund investments, organize lecture notes and homework, read the news (I spend a lot of time at cnn.com), edit video clips, etc.

(14) I cannot live without my laptop, it's quite simple. (15) Throughout the years, I have become increasingly dependent on it for day-to-day activities such as corresponding with professors, keeping in touch with families, and friends, as well as organizing personal documents such as music, pictures, and the like. (16) I still make a habit of carrying it wherever I go, and probably spend more time with this so-called writing technology than any other object or person.(17) In the event of an emergency evacuation, it would definitely be the first thing I take and the last thing to let go.

  1. Leave it as it is.

  2. The convenience of relocation implied in laptop ownership has beyond that broadened my belief

  3. Beyond that, the implication of laptop ownership has vastly broadened the convenience of relocation, my belief, my world views

  4. Beyond that, the vast broadening of my belief and world views has been due to Laptop ownership, implied in convenience of relocation

  5. Beyond that, the Laptop ownership implying convenience of relocation has been vastly broadening my belief, my world views

Reveal answer Fill a bubble to check yourself
A Correct answer
Explanation

Option (A) is the answer as the given sentence retains the original meaning of the sentence while using correct tense and cogently forms a link with the latter part of the sentence.  The sentence implies the author belief of surfing a new place (relocate is to move to a new place) with his laptop has broadened his world views and has made him a better individual. On these lines, options (B) and (C) can be ruled out. ‘My belief’ in (B) is ambiguous, hence can be ruled out. ‘Has been’ in option (E) suggests present perfect continuous tense whereas ‘has’ in latter part reflects present perfect tense, hence option (E) is also ruled out.

Multiple choice

Which of the following phrases is the best that can be inserted at the beginning of sentence 5?

Direction for questions 13 to 18: The following passage is an early draft of an essay. Some parts of the passage need to be rewritten. Read the passage and select the best answers for the questions that follow. Some questions are about particular sentences or parts of sentences and ask you to improve sentence structure or word choice. Other questions ask you to consider organization and development. In choosing answers, follow the requirements of standard written English.

 

Macbeth
(1) Composed in late 1606 or early 1607, Macbeth is the last of Shakespeare's four great tragedies, the others being Hamlet, King Lear and Othello. (2) It is a relatively short play without a major subplot, and it is considered by many scholars to be Shakespeare’s darkest work. (3) Lear is an utter tragedy in which the natural world is amorally indifferent toward mankind, but in Macbeth, Shakespeare adds a supernatural dimension that purposively conspires against Macbeth and his kingdom. (4) In the tragedy of Lear, the distraught king summons the goddess of Chaos, Hecht, in Macbeth, Hecate appears as an actual character.

(5) Shakespeare's Scottish tragedy is about Macbeth's bloody rise to power, including the murder of the Scottish king, Duncan, and the guilt-ridden pathology of evil deeds generating still more evil deeds. (6) Lady Macbeth was an integral part of the play’s most memorable character in the thematic web. (7) Like her husband, Lady Macbeth's ambition for power leads her into an unnatural, phantasmagoric realm of witchcraft, insomnia and madness. (8) While Macbeth responds to the prophecies of the play's famous trio of witches, Lady Macbeth goes even further by figuratively transforming herself into an unnatural, desexualized evil spirit. (9) The current trend of critical opinion is toward an upward reevaluation of Lady Macbeth, who is said to be rehumanized by her insanity and her suicide. (10) Much of this reappraisal of Lady Macbeth has taken place in discussions of her ironically strong marriage to Macbeth. (11) A union that on unfolding of the tragedy undergoes disintegration rested on loving bonds.

  1. The rapture as depicted in

  2. On the level of human evil,

  3. Nevertheless, affliction in

  4. In this tragic affairs,

  5. The misfortune of Hecate in

Reveal answer Fill a bubble to check yourself
B Correct answer
Explanation

The sentence develops no contrasting situation, therefore option (C) is ruled out.  “This” in option (D) is ambiguous, hence ruled out.  Option (E) is not cogent with the sentence as ‘misfortune of Hecate’ is not explained by the sentence.  The sentence highlights the tragedy as depicted by Shakespeare in Macbeth.  In this light, option (B) is the answer. ’Rapture’ in (A) is the state of being carried away with joy, love, etc; ecstasy; hence (A) is ruled out.

Multiple choice

Which word could best replace ‘escalation’ in sentence 4?

Direction for questions 19 to 24: The following passage is an early draft of an essay. Some parts of the passage need to be rewritten. Read the passage and select the best answers for the questions that follow. Some questions are about particular sentences or parts of sentences and ask you to improve sentence structure or word choice. Other questions ask you to consider organization and development. In choosing answers, follow the requirements of standard written English.

My Laptop
(1)In the Stone Age, our ancestors used tablets to organize important thoughts, keep track of daily activities, and pass on their knowledge to future generations. (2) Their method of writing was inefficient as much effort was being put into carving and preserving the tablet, while the end result contained little information relative to its size. (3) As technologies evolve, we have refined our methods of writing and have come up with newer, cheaper, and more efficient ways to communicate. (4) Living in the age of information escalation, my most intimate experience with writing technologies comes from the use of my royal blue VAIO.

(5) In this essay, I will first describe how I have been shaped by my laptop, then provide nuanced detail about my use of it, and finally explain why my relationship with it is interesting.

(6) First, my laptop has shaped my style of living for the better. (7) Throughout my undergraduate years, I have taken the opportunity to travel and try many new things. (8) Specifically, I have participated in a few three to six month internship / cooperative education program in order to learn more about my own career aptitude. (9) During temporary relocations to Philadelphia, New York City, Boston, Los Angeles, and Taipei, my laptop has always accompanied me and provided great mobility to wherever destination. (10) In this, through the use of Outlook Express and AIM, my VAIO helped me communicate with colleagues during the day, and family and friends at night. (11) Beyond that, I believe the convenience of relocation that is implied in laptop ownership has vastly broadened my world views and has allowed me to become more independent as a young adult.

(12) Other than being a necessary traveling companion, my laptop has also become an integral part of my life while at school. (13) For instance, I use it to manage mutual fund investments, organize lecture notes and homework, read the news (I spend a lot of time at cnn.com), edit video clips, etc.

(14) I cannot live without my laptop, it's quite simple. (15) Throughout the years, I have become increasingly dependent on it for day-to-day activities such as corresponding with professors, keeping in touch with families, and friends, as well as organizing personal documents such as music, pictures, and the like. (16) I still make a habit of carrying it wherever I go, and probably spend more time with this so-called writing technology than any other object or person.(17) In the event of an emergency evacuation, it would definitely be the first thing I take and the last thing to let go.

  1. detonation

  2. technology

  3. concussion

  4. explosion

  5. blast

Reveal answer Fill a bubble to check yourself
D Correct answer
Explanation

‘Escalation’ reflects growth, intensification. Of all the options, ‘explosion’ meaning sudden, rapid and widespread increase could replace ‘escalation’ and would convey a cogent meaning to the sentence. Hence, (D) is the answer.

Multiple choice

In context, which of the following is the best way to revise and combine the underlined portions of sentences 10 and 11 (reproduced below)?

Much of this reappraisal of Lady Macbeth has taken place in discussions of her ironically strong marriage to Macbeth. A union that on unfolding of the tragedy undergoes disintegration rested on loving bonds.

Direction for questions 13 to 18: The following passage is an early draft of an essay. Some parts of the passage need to be rewritten. Read the passage and select the best answers for the questions that follow. Some questions are about particular sentences or parts of sentences and ask you to improve sentence structure or word choice. Other questions ask you to consider organization and development. In choosing answers, follow the requirements of standard written English.

 

Macbeth
(1) Composed in late 1606 or early 1607, Macbeth is the last of Shakespeare's four great tragedies, the others being Hamlet, King Lear and Othello. (2) It is a relatively short play without a major subplot, and it is considered by many scholars to be Shakespeare’s darkest work. (3) Lear is an utter tragedy in which the natural world is amorally indifferent toward mankind, but in Macbeth, Shakespeare adds a supernatural dimension that purposively conspires against Macbeth and his kingdom. (4) In the tragedy of Lear, the distraught king summons the goddess of Chaos, Hecht, in Macbeth, Hecate appears as an actual character.

(5) Shakespeare's Scottish tragedy is about Macbeth's bloody rise to power, including the murder of the Scottish king, Duncan, and the guilt-ridden pathology of evil deeds generating still more evil deeds. (6) Lady Macbeth was an integral part of the play’s most memorable character in the thematic web. (7) Like her husband, Lady Macbeth's ambition for power leads her into an unnatural, phantasmagoric realm of witchcraft, insomnia and madness. (8) While Macbeth responds to the prophecies of the play's famous trio of witches, Lady Macbeth goes even further by figuratively transforming herself into an unnatural, desexualized evil spirit. (9) The current trend of critical opinion is toward an upward reevaluation of Lady Macbeth, who is said to be rehumanized by her insanity and her suicide. (10) Much of this reappraisal of Lady Macbeth has taken place in discussions of her ironically strong marriage to Macbeth. (11) A union that on unfolding of the tragedy undergoes disintegration rested on loving bonds.

  1. Macbeth; a union that on unfolding of the tragedy undergoes disintegration rested on loving bonds.

  2. Macbeth leading to disintegration of the loving bonded union as and when the tragedy unfolded.

  3. Macbeth had caused the disintegration of their union as the tragedy unfolded, that rests on loving bonds.

  4. Macbeth; on the unfolding of the tragedy, their love bonded union had undergone the disintegration.

  5. Macbeth, a union that rests on loving bonds but undergoes disintegration as the tragedy unfolds.

Reveal answer Fill a bubble to check yourself
E Correct answer
Explanation

Option (E) is in tandem with this phrase - 'ironically strong marriage' in the initial part of the sentence.  Moreover, it retains correct tense and conjunctions.  Hence, (E) is the answer.