In context, which of the following revisions is necessary in sentence 10?
PASSAGE-III
Direction for questions 13 to 18: The following passage is an early draft of an essay. Some parts of the passage need to be rewritten. Read the passage and select the best answers for the questions that follow. Some questions are about particular sentences or parts of sentences and ask you to improve sentence structure or word choice. Other questions ask you to consider organization and development. In choosing answers, follow the requirements of standard written English.
Narrative–My Foolish Faith
(1) Life without hope in a dull, frustrating world congeals the stuff of human existence...almost. (2) Born-lived-died, being the plot of too many bad novels dooms some more, chaining their lives to a Maslowian fate. (3) Others drown the raw truth in unrelenting labor, raucous revelry, sunlit spring breezes, cigarettes at noontime, or the bottle. (4) Yet some find hope in this droll, frustrating world, but they will not agree and cannot be sure of that hope.
(5) Once I could not find hope. (6) I still can't. (7)That's why I leaped for joy when it found me instead. (8) Somehow, by the Grace of God, I find myself with the only, one single true hope, a nonsensical faith, and a belief - I cannot prove with immortal things, a book that turns a hopeless, droll, frustrating world into a beautiful, hopeful world where smallest intricacies and biggest setbacks bring joy alike.
(9) Did I say my faith makes no sense? (10) I was right. No sane person in his wrong mind would agree to a divine Creator, Revealer, Saviour, Lord, and Friend. (11) Human depravity ensures sane human wrong-mindedness.
(12) Once one obtains this hope, the difficulty of Christianity shifts from the foolishness of believing myths to the stupidity of doing what they say. (13)This is my challenge, for God has revealed His will plainly and has promised to help His adopted children understand His Word, the Bible. (14) Once a person agrees to accept the entire Bible as God presents it in the Bible, the test of faith (or mere hope) comes. (15) A mere hoper won’t bother (or dare) to keep exactly what God says to a person with true faith when he tries and succeeds when he does.