Multiple choice

Directions: This question presents a sentence, all or part of which is underlined. Beneath the sentence you will find five ways of phrasing the underlined part. The first of these repeats the original; the other four are different. If you think the original is best, choose the first answer; otherwise choose one of the others.

Among the reasons cited for the city mayor's decision to abstain from running for reelection were the high cost of electioneering, waning popularity of his party, and desiring to spend more time with his family.

  1. and desiring to spend more time with his family.

  2. and his desiring to spend more time with his family.

  3. and his being desirous to spend more time with his family.

  4. and his being desirous of spending more time with his family.

  5. and the desire to spend more time with his family.

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E Correct answer
Explanation

Explanation for (1): The sentence violates the tenets of parallel construction. 'Cost' and 'popularity' are noun phrases, whereas 'desiring' is a gerund form.

Explanation for (2): This option fails to correct the error of parallelism. (Cost, popularity, desiring)

Explanation for (3): This option fails to correct the error of parallelism. (Cost, popularity, desirous)
Explanation for (4): This option fails to correct the error of parallelism. (Cost, popularity, desirous) Justification for (5): The original sentence violates the tenets of parallel construction. 'Cost' and 'popularity' are noun phrases, whereas 'desiring' is a gerund form. This option corrects the error. (Cost, popularity, desire).