Multiple choice

This necessitated their regular keep-up and maintenance resulting in the emergence of the whole crop of crafts and mechanics.

Directions for the question:
The following sentence tests correctness and effectiveness of expression. Part of the  sentence or the entire sentence is underlined; beneath the sentence are five ways of phrasing the underlined material. Choice (A) repeats the original phrasing; the other four choices are different. If you think the original phrasing produces a better sentence than any of the alternatives, select choice (A). If not, select one of the other choices.

In making your selection, follow the requirements of standard written English; that is, pay attention to grammar, choice of words, sentence construction, and punctuation. Your selection should result in the most effective sentence – clear and precise, without awkwardness or ambiguity.

Example:

If it were a British ship the resistance to the duty would be offered by the land merchants rather than by the sea traders; for the merchants did not desire that the cost of the merchandise to themselves and their customers should be doubled without some equivalent advantage.
(A)  If it were a British ship the resistance to the duty would be offered by the land merchants
(B)  If it had a British ship the resistance to the duty would be offered by the land merchants
(C)  If it were a British ship the resistance to the duty would have been offered by the land merchants
(D)  If it had been a British ship the resistance to the duty would have been offered by the land merchants
(E) If it would have been a British ship the resistance to the duty would be offered by the land merchant

Answer: (D)

  1. This necessitated their regular keep-up and maintenance

  2. This made necessary their regular keep-up and maintenance

  3. This necessitated their regular up-keep and maintenance

  4. This necessitated their regular keeping and maintenance

  5. This necessitated their regular keeping-up and maintenance

Reveal answer Fill a bubble to check yourself
C Correct answer
Explanation

(3) Corrects the error in diction up-keep means 'the cost of keeping' something in good condition.