Multiple choice

Directions: The following sentences test correctness and effectiveness of expression. Part of each sentence or the entire sentence is underlined; beneath each sentence are five ways of phrasing the underlined material. Choice A repeats the original phrasing; the other four choices are different. If you think the original phrasing produces a better sentence than any of the alternatives, select choice A. If not, select one of the other choices.

In making your selection, follow the requirements of standard written English; that is pay attention to grammar, choice of words, sentence construction, and punctuation. Your selection should result in the most effective sentence - clear and precise, without awkwardness or ambiguity. Luck served to him so well that what shots were wildly aimed at him, as he dashed by, went wide of striking him.

  1. Luck served to him so well that what shots were wildly aimed at him

  2. Luck served him so well that whatever shots were wildly aimed at him

  3. Luck served him so well that what shots were wildly aimed for him

  4. Luck served him well enough that what shots were wildly aimed at him

  5. Luck served to him so well that what shots were wildly aimed for him

Reveal answer Fill a bubble to check yourself
B Correct answer
Explanation

This option rectifies the prepositional error by deleting 'to' before him and error of idiomatic usage by replacing 'what' by 'whatever'.