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Direction for questions 19 to 24: The following passage is an early draft of an essay. Some parts of the passage need to be rewritten. Read the passage and select the best answers for the questions that follow. Some questions are about particular sentences or parts of sentences and ask you to improve sentence structure or word choice. Other questions ask you to consider organization and development. In choosing answers, follow the requirements of standard written English.
Passage – IV
(1) Blowing bubbles in my open water class, I’ve logged over 100 dives. (2)This love for diving has evolved into an intense passion towards protecting the ocean, and all of its inhabitants. (3) I’ve chosen to put my love for the ocean into action, as an environmentalist. (4) Actually, this passion extends out towards efforts that took to help all the planetary domains gain protection. (5) As such, I appreciate when others take the time educate me on those other realms for which I know less about. (6) To be an environmentalist, one must choose the cause which resonates within ones sole, and run with it. (7) One must be willing to educate people about the environment.(8) And educate those people who support other causes. (9) Together we can help each other towards learning how to become a true “Environmentalist”.(10) We must all encourage positive collaboration and education as opposed to being against something. (11) For example, sharks are being decimated to near extinction simply for their fins. (12) The fins are used to make Shark Fin soup, a delicacy popular particularly in Taiwan and Singapore. (13) It would be easy to blame these communities for creating the demand. (14) However in conversing with Asian environmentalists, they liken the culture around eating Shark Fin soup to the culture surrounding Americans eating turkey for Thanksgiving dinner. (15) There are continuous and progressing efforts to educate these people, by members of their own community, on just how dangerous his cultural practice is and the devastating impact this could have on their (our) world if all the sharks were to disappears as a result.
(16) Famous restaurants have taken endangered Swordfish off their menus, these same restaurants are buying wild-caught salmon (and boosting the economy of local fisheries in the process), laundromats have started selling green detergent, this just to name a few of these enlightened changes. (17) This is how the “Environmentalist” can begin the revolution. (18) Just find something you believe in and make a stand. (19) One by one, we can make our planet a cleaner place to live, steeped in healthy bio-diversity for generations to come.