Multiple choice

Directions: This question presents a sentence, all or part of which is underlined. Beneath the sentence you will find five ways of phrasing the underlined part. The first of these repeats the original; the other four are different. If you think the original is best, choose the first answer; otherwise choose one of the others. In the last three hundred years, man has created a magnificent industrial society, produced machines that do much of the work for him and has gathered an ever-increasing knowledge of the universe.

  1. has gathered an ever-increasing knowledge of the universe

  2. an ever-increasing knowledge of the universe has been gathered

  3. gathered an ever-increasing knowledge of the universe

  4. gathering in the process an ever-increasing knowledge of the universe

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C Correct answer
Explanation

Explanation for (1): The usage of 'has' gathered is incorrect as it does not continue with the parallel construction of the sentence.

Explanation for (2): This option compounds the error of parallel construction by converting the underlined clause into passive voice.

Justification for (3): This option corrects the error of parallelism. (has created…produced… gathered)
Explanation for (4): This option does not correct the error of parallelism. (has created…produced… gathering) Explanation for (5): This option corrects the error of parallelism. (has created…produced…gathering)