Multiple choice

Directions: The following sentence tests correctness and effectiveness of expression. Part of the sentence or the entire sentence is underlined; beneath the sentence are five ways of phrasing the underlined material. Choice (1) repeats the original phrasing; the other four choices are different. If you think the original phrasing produces a better sentence than any of the alternatives, select choice (1). If not, select one of the other choices.

With the usual display of semi-barbaric pomp, arrangements were made by Albert to engage in the perilous holy war, from which few ever returned.

  1. arrangements were made by Albert to engage in the perilous holy war

  2. Albert made arrangements to engage in the perilous holy war

  3. arrangements are made by Albert to engage in the perilous holy war

  4. arrangements are to be made by Albert to engage in the perilous holy war

  5. Albert made arrangements to engage himself in the perilous holy war

Reveal answer Fill a bubble to check yourself
B Correct answer
Explanation

corrects the error of dangling modifier.