Multiple choice

Directions: This question presents a sentence, all or part of which is underlined. Beneath the sentence you will find five ways of phrasing the underlined part. The first of these repeats the original; the other four are different. If you think the original is best, choose the first answer; otherwise choose one of the others.

Although completely deteriorated, the man was able to make out that the artifact was made up of a very expensive and rare material.

  1. Although completely deteriorated, the man was able to make out that the artifact was made up of a very expensive and rare material.

  2. Although completely deteriorated, the man made out that the artifact was made up of a very expensive and rare material.

  3. Although completely deteriorated, the man found out that the artifact was made of a very expensive and rare material.

  4. Although completely deteriorated, the artifact, the man found out was made up of a very expensive and rare material.

  5. Although completely deteriorated, the artifact, the man was able to make out, was made up of a very expensive and rare material.

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E Correct answer
Explanation

The original sentence contains a dangling modifier; it seems it is the man who is deteriorated. The option rectifies the error by putting 'the artifact' immediately after the qualifying