Multiple choice

Directions: This question presents a sentence, all or part of which is underlined. Beneath the sentence you will find five ways of phrasing the underlined part. The first of these repeats the original; the other four are different. If you think the original is best, choose the first answer; otherwise choose one of the others.

The lines seem to shift and shimmer as you look at them; before long one has a powerful desire to look away, anywhere but at the painfully dazzling pattern in front.

  1. before long one has a powerful desire to look away, anywhere but at the painfully dazzling pattern in front

  2. before long one has a powerful desire to look away, to the painfully dazzling pattern in front

  3. before long you have a powerful desire to look away, anywhere but at the painfully dazzling pattern in front

  4. before long you have a powerful desire to look away, to the painfully dazzling pattern in front

  5. before long one has a powerful desire to look at the painfully dazzling pattern in front

Reveal answer Fill a bubble to check yourself
C Correct answer
Explanation

In the original sentence, there is a shift of pronoun from the second person to the third. This option rectifies the error.