Multiple choice

Directions: This question presents a sentence, all or part of which is underlined. Beneath the sentence you will find five ways of phrasing the underlined part. The first of these repeats the original; the other four are different. If you think the original is best, choose the first answer; otherwise choose one of the others.

The proposal to privatize loss making government companies, like the national airline and the postal department, that were put forth by the Indian government were less harsh when compared to other SAARC members, which advocated total privatization

  1. The proposal to privatize loss making government companies, like the national airline and the postal department, that were put forth by the Indian government were less harsh when compared to other SAARC members, which advocated total privatization

  2. The proposal of privatizing of loss making government companies, like the national airline and the postal department, put forth by India was less harsh when compared to the approach of SAARC members advocating total privatization

  3. When compared with proposal for total privatization put forth by other SAARC members, the proposal to privatize loss making government companies, like the national carrier and the postal department, that were put forth by India were less harsh

  4. The proposal by the government of India, to privatize loss making government companies like the national carrier and the postal department, was less harsh when compared to the proposal of total privatization put forth by the other members of SAARC.

  5. India, in comparison to the other members of SAARC, put forth a proposal to privatize loss making government companies like the national carrier and the postal department which were less harsh than those suggested by the other members

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D Correct answer
Explanation

Correct; removes subject-verb error by referring to 'proposal' in singular; the cardinal use of commas to segregate a clause is that the parts of the sentence before and after the clause, when read together (like in the sentence that you are reading), should make perfect sense. Incorrect; it seems as if the national carrier and the postal departments were less harsh in comparison to something