Multiple choice

Direction: The following sentence tests correctness and effectiveness of expression. Part of each sentence or the entire sentence is underlined; beneath each sentence are five ways of phrasing the underlined material. Choice A repeats the original phrasing; the other four choices are different. If you think the original phrasing produces a better sentence than any of the alternatives, select choice A; if not, select one of the other choices.

I saw my parents decorating the hall for my surprise birthday party, while I was outside their room door.

  1. I saw my parents decorating the hall for my surprise birthday party, while I was outside their room door.

  2. I saw my parents, while I was outside their room door decorating the hall for my surprise birthday party.

  3. My parents, I saw, while decorating the hall for my surprise birthday party outside their room door.

  4. While I was outside their room door, I saw my parents decorating the hall for my surprise birthday party.

  5. For my surprise birthday party, outside their room door, saw them decorating the hall.

Reveal answer Fill a bubble to check yourself
D Correct answer
Explanation

(D): Misplaced phrase error.