Multiple choice

Directions: This question presents a sentence, all or part of which is underlined. Beneath the sentence you will find five ways of phrasing the underlined part. The first of these repeats the original; the other four are different. If you think the original is best, choose the first answer; otherwise choose one of the others.

According to government statistics released last year, despite a ramp up in its efforts to curb population growth, the number of new births reported has increased by 3.8%.

  1. despite a ramp up in its efforts to curb population growth, the number of new births reported has increased by 3.8%

  2. despite a ramp up in the government's efforts to curb population growth, the number of new births reported has increased by 3.8%

  3. despite a ramp up in its efforts to curb population growth, the number of new births reported increased by 3.8%

  4. despite a ramp up in the government's efforts to curb population growth, the number of new births reported increased by 3.8%

  5. the number of new births reported went up by 3.8% despite the government ramping up its efforts to curb population growth

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D Correct answer
Explanation

Correct. The option removes the error of Verb tense by using Simple Past - increased - to refer to growth in birth rate. Also, the option removes the Error of Missing Antecedent by substituting 'its' with 'government's'.