Multiple choice

Directions: This question presents a sentence, all or part of which is underlined. Beneath the sentence you will find five ways of phrasing the underlined part. The first of these repeats the original; the other four are different. If you think the original is best, choose the first answer; otherwise choose one of the others.

With more and more movies being made into video games, the demand for game consoles, advanced gaming tools, and conventions for gamers is increasing.

  1. the demand for game consoles, advanced gaming tools, and conventions for gamers is increasing

  2. the demand for game consoles, advanced gaming tools, and gamer conventions is increasing

  3. demand for game consoles, advanced gaming tools, and gamer conventions has increased

  4. game consoles, advanced gaming tools, and gamer conventions are increasing in demand

  5. game consoles, advanced gaming tools, and conventions for gamers are increasingly in demand

Reveal answer Fill a bubble to check yourself
B Correct answer
Explanation

Correct. The option removes the Error of parallelism by making 'game consoles', 'gaming tools', and 'gamer conventions' parallel.